Doodle-a-day - Day 18 - Nightmare

This is a creature from my comic, working title "TempLife". It took me a long time to figure out his look, and even now i'm not 100% if that's how i want him to look. But it's a starting point. Opinions, critiques, comments, or any form of feedback welcome. I'm having trouble translating him from my head to the page, or in this case, computer screen.